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2019년 1월 16일 (수) 13:05에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

2019-01-16T13:05:13Z

Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 유하은 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 유하○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

2019-01-09T11:04:51Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 유하은 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 유하○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

GGHS유하은: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2019-01-09T08:05:56Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

2018년 12월 29일 (토) 02:04에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

2018-12-29T02:04:51Z

2018년 12월 29일 (토) 02:04에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

2018-12-29T02:04:30Z

Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 10 Yoo Ha Eun 문서를 GGHS 유하은 문서로 옮겼습니다

2018-12-28T10:47:51Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 10 Yoo Ha Eun 문서를 GGHS 유하은 문서로 옮겼습니다

2018년 12월 28일 (금) 10:43에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

2018-12-28T10:43:38Z

2018년 7월 26일 (목) 23:50에 대한 Arolf90의 편집

2018-07-26T23:50:48Z

Arolf90: 새 문서: right I am a sophomore in high school. After I got my report card for the first semester, I felt that my English skill was too poo...

2018-07-26T13:41:28Z

새 문서: right I am a sophomore in high school. After I got my report card for the first semester, I felt that my English skill was too poo...

새 문서

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I am a sophomore in high school. After I got my report card for the first semester, I felt that my English skill was too poor. So I joined the global camp which lasts for three days and two nights.
My dream is to be a movie director and make various movies. I chose the theme as "Gamubeakui" which is a part of the Goryeo Dynasty's Performing arts. The reason for choose to theme the Performing arts of Goryeo Dynasty was because it to commemorate 1,100 years of the Goryeo's National foundation Day.

I knew a lot about modern performing arts. However, I knew very little about the performing arts of Goryeo. In addition, my group was one grade, Seoyoung and I, only two member. I and Saeyoung had to do what 7 or 10 people do in other groups. I don't know what to do and as I was the leader, I felt a lot of pressure. But I thought nothing would be solved if I keep worrying like that. So we divided the table of contents to find out how to describe "Gamubeakui " and did research on our respective fields. During the investigation, we helped each other whenever there was a difficult part. At first, I was worried that Se-young would be uncomfortable with me, her senior. However, as we was doing the data research by helping each other, I felt good and thankful because I felt that Saeyoung was not uncomfortable. With such cooperation, the work force was progressing faster even though it was much smaller than the others. And as number of people was small, we felt more responsible and did to work harder.

I knew very little about Gamubeakui, but I knew many things from Survey data. first, I found out that As the Palgwanhoe and the lantern festival, which served the Buddha, became an important state rite, the custom of various kinds of singing and dancing was formed during the Goryeo Dynasty. Second, I learned that the biggest events of Goryeo's nine major holidays were lantern celebrations held on the 15th of the first lunar month and The Palgwanhoe that was held on the eleventh lunar month. Third, learned that Gamubeakui is divided into HyangakJungjae and Dangakjangjae. Here, HyangakJungjae is a royal court performance of Goryeo Dynasty. And Dangakjangjae is a Chinese royal performance. I learned more about it.

The most interesting part is "Pogurak". Pogurak is a game of throwing a ball into a hole in the door. We decided to announce "Pogurak" with a short play. I hope my friends and teachers will laugh a lot. I think this global camp will help me later become a movie director and make or evaluate a movie. Also, although it was a short period of time, I think my English listening ability has improved a little.

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 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
-<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
+<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 4]]'''''</center>
 I participated in the first grade summer vacation global camp and the second grade global camp. At that time, I felt that global camp was really hard even though it was really good because my English ability improved a lot in a short period of time. So I thought about whether or not to apply for a camp. But this camp was my last one because I am now in third grade. So I participated in the global camp with the idea of 'let's do it right one more time.'

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 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
-Put your essay content here.
+I participated in the first grade summer vacation global camp and the second grade global camp. At that time, I felt that global camp was really hard even though it was really good because my English ability improved a lot in a short period of time. So I thought about whether or not to apply for a camp. But this camp was my last one because I am now in third grade. So I participated in the global camp with the idea of 'let's do it right one more time.'
 ==2018 Summer Personal Essay==

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 ==2018 Summer Personal Essay==
 I am a sophomore in high school. After I got my report card for the first semester, I felt that my English skill was too poor. So I joined the global camp which lasts for three days and two nights.
 My dream is to be a movie director and make various movies. I chose the theme as "Gamubeakui" which is a part of  the Goryeo Dynasty's Performing arts. The reason for choosing theme the Performing arts of Goryeo Dynasty was to commemorate 1,100 years of the Goryeo's National foundation Day.

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	==2019 Winter Personal Essay==		==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
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	==2018 Summer Personal Essay==		==2018 Summer Personal Essay==

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	I am a sophomore in high school. After I got my report card for the first semester, I felt that my English skill was too poor. So I joined the global camp which lasts for three days and two nights.		I am a sophomore in high school. After I got my report card for the first semester, I felt that my English skill was too poor. So I joined the global camp which lasts for three days and two nights.

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 I am a sophomore in high school. After I got my report card for the first semester, I felt that my English skill was too poor. So I joined the global camp which lasts for three days and two nights.
-My dream is to be a movie director and make various movies. I chose the theme as "Gamubeakui" which is a part of  the Goryeo Dynasty's Performing arts. The reason for choose  to theme the Performing arts of Goryeo Dynasty was because it to commemorate 1,100 years of the Goryeo's National foundation Day.
+My dream is to be a movie director and make various movies. I chose the theme as "Gamubeakui" which is a part of  the Goryeo Dynasty's Performing arts. The reason for choosing theme the Performing arts of Goryeo Dynasty was to commemorate 1,100 years of the Goryeo's National foundation Day.
-I knew a lot about modern performing arts. However, I knew very little about the performing arts of Goryeo. In addition, my group was one grade, Seoyoung and I, only two member.  I and Saeyoung had to do what 7 or 10 people do in other groups.  I don't know what to do and as I was the leader, I felt a lot of pressure. But I thought nothing would be solved if I keep worrying like that. So we divided the table of contents to find out how to describe "Gamubeakui " and did research on our respective fields. During the investigation, we helped each other whenever there was a difficult part. At first, I was worried that Se-young would be uncomfortable with me, her senior. However, as we was doing the data research by helping each other, I felt good and thankful because I felt that Saeyoung was not uncomfortable. With such cooperation, the work force was progressing faster even though it was much smaller than the others. And as number of people was small, we felt more responsible and did to work harder.
+I knew a lot about modern performing arts. However, I knew very little about the performing arts of Goryeo. In addition, my group had first grade, Seoyoung and I, only two member.  I and Saeyoung had to do what 7 or 10 people doing in the other groups.  I did not know what to do and since I was the leader, I felt a lot of pressure. But I thought nothing would be solved if I keep worrying like that. So we divided the table of contents to find out how to describe "Gamubeakui " and did research on our respective fields. During the investigation, we helped each other whenever there was a difficult part. At first, I was worried that Se-young would be uncomfortable with me, her senior. However, as we were doing the data research and helping each other, I felt relieved and thankful because I felt that Saeyoung was not uncomfortable. With such cooperation, the work was progressing faster even though it was much less than the others. And as number of people was less, we felt more responsible and did our work harder.
-I knew very little about Gamubeakui, but I knew many things from Survey data. first, I found out that As the Palgwanhoe and the lantern festival, which served the Buddha, became an important state rite, the custom of various kinds of singing and dancing was formed during the Goryeo Dynasty. Second, I learned that the biggest events of Goryeo's nine major holidays were lantern celebrations held on the 15th of the first lunar month and The Palgwanhoe that was held on the eleventh lunar month. Third, learned that Gamubeakui is divided into  HyangakJungjae and  Dangakjangjae. Here, HyangakJungjae is a royal court performance of Goryeo Dynasty. And Dangakjangjae is a Chinese royal performance.  I learned more about it.
+I knew very little about Gamubeakui, but I knew many things from our research. First, I found out about the Palgwanhoe and the lantern festival, which served the Buddha and became an important state rite, the custom of various kinds of singing and dancing was formed during the Goryeo Dynasty. Second, I learnt that the biggest events of Goryeo's, two of the nine major holidays were lantern celebration held on the 15th of the first lunar month and Palgwanhoe that was held on the eleventh lunar month. Third, i discovered that Gamubeakui was divided into  HyangakJungjae and  Dangakjangjae. Here, HyangakJungjae is a korean traditional royal court performance of Goryeo Dynasty. And Dangakjangjae is a royal performance accompanied with chinese music.
-The most interesting part is "Pogurak". Pogurak is a game of throwing a ball into a hole in the door. We decided to announce "Pogurak" with a short play. I hope my friends and teachers will laugh a lot. I think this global camp will help me later become a movie director and make or evaluate a movie. Also, although it was a short period of time, I think my English listening ability has improved a little.
+The most interesting part was "Pogurak". Pogurak is a game of throwing a ball through a hole in the door. We decided to announce "Pogurak" with as a short play. I hope my friends and teachers would enjoy and laugh a lot. I think this global camp will help me later become a movie director and make or evaluate movies. Also, although it was a short period of time, I think my English listening skills has improved a little.