GGHS 박혜○ - 편집 역사

2019년 1월 16일 (수) 13:03에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

2019-01-16T13:03:01Z

Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 박혜림 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 박혜○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

2019-01-09T11:03:53Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 박혜림 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 박혜○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

Lyndsey: Skanand(토론)의 편집을 GGHS rrrrrime의 마지막 버전으로 되돌림

2019-01-09T09:52:11Z

Skanand(토론)의 편집을 GGHS rrrrrime의 마지막 버전으로 되돌림

Skanand: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2019-01-09T09:29:32Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

Skanand: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2019-01-09T09:28:57Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

GGHS rrrrrime: 사진

2019-01-09T08:11:34Z

사진

2019년 1월 9일 (수) 08:06에 대한 GGHS rrrrrime의 편집

2019-01-09T08:06:35Z

GGHS rrrrrime: 사진

2019-01-09T07:55:39Z

사진

GGHS rrrrrime: 팀 사진 업로드

2019-01-09T07:52:15Z

팀 사진 업로드

2019년 1월 9일 (수) 07:50에 대한 GGHS rrrrrime의 편집

2019-01-09T07:50:48Z

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 {{GGHS학생
 |사진 =
-|이름 = 박혜림
+|학번 = 2305
-|영문 = park hye rim
-|학번 = 	2305
-|팀번호 = 4
 |위키아이디= GGHS rrrrrime
 }}
 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
-<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
+<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 4]]'''''</center>
-[[File:글로벌캠프.png/150px]]
 Although I lived in Ganghwa for a long time, I didn't know what the charm of Ganghwa was. However, people from other regions knew the charm of Ganghwa and visited Ganghwa many times. Watching this scene, I felt that I should know more about my hometown than them, and this led me to participate in the global camp.
 I chose the topic 'Culture and Society of Gnghwa' among many topics related to Ganghwa. Of course, there were many other interesting topics, but I thought the range was too limited to know all about it. So, I chose a topic that shows variously the charm of Ganghwa.

@@ 11번째 줄: / 11번째 줄: @@
 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
 [[File:글로벌캠프.png/150px]]
-Although I lived in Ganghwa for a long time, I didn't know much about Ganghwa. However, people from other regions knew the charm of Ganghwa and visited Ganghwa many times. Knowing this fact, I felt that I should know more about my hometown, and this led me to participate in the global camp. I chose the topic 'Culture and Society of Ganghwa' among many topics related to Ganghwa. Of course, there were many other interesting topics, but I thought the range was too limited to know all about it. So, I chose a topic that shows various characteristics of Ganghwa.
+Although I lived in Ganghwa for a long time, I didn't know what the charm of Ganghwa was. However, people from other regions knew the charm of Ganghwa and visited Ganghwa many times. Watching this scene, I felt that I should know more about my hometown than them, and this led me to participate in the global camp.
-Even before the camp, I knew about Ganghwa's festival such as the Ganghwa Dolmen Festival and Ganghwa's specialty such as ginseng and sweet potatoes. During my stay in ganghwa, many people keep asking me about ganghwa speciality, and that’s how I learn from them.
+Even before the camp, I knew about Ganghwa's festiver such as the Ganghwa Dolmen Festival and Ganghwa's specialty such as ginseng and sweet potatoes. Because During my life in Ganghwa, many people asked me, and I saw and felt many things about Ganghwa.
-In general, I learned about Ganghwa culture and society that I researched directly during the camp. I learned that there is a wind orchestra in Ganghwa, and the society of Ganghwa and Shamanism are connected through Mt. Mani of Ganghwa. Listening to another group's presentation, I also learned that Ganghwa and the Goryeo Dynasty were closely related, which made me feel that the proud of the old site of Ganghwa.
+In general, I learned about Ganghwa culture and society that I researched directly during the camp. I learned that there is a wind orchestra in Ganghwa, and that the society of Ganghwa and Shamanism are connected through Mt. Mani of Ganghwa. Listening to another group's presentation, I also learned that Ganghwa and the Goryeo Dynasty were closely related, which made me feel that the proud of the old site of Ganghwa.
 During the camp, My role is for the Ganghwa Festival, such as Ganghwa's Mt. Goryeo azalea Festival and salted shrimp Festival, and I wrote a presentation script of the news format. Based on the presentation script, I also conducted presentation exercise.
-As I announced through the news format during the camp, I think that I wanted to use the media format to inform Ganghwa. Of course, I still know that there are many visitors to Ganghwa. But when I asked my friends in other regions, "Did you know about the Ganghwa?" there have been many friends who answered "I didn't know." Based on this experience, I would like to inform them about Ganghwa not only other regions but also the world through internet media, news and newspapers.
+As I announced through the news format during the camp, I think that I wanted to use the media format to inform Ganghwa. Of course, I still know that there are many visitors to Ganghwa. But when I asked my friends in other regions, "Did you know about the Ganghwa?" there have been many friends who answered "I didn't know." Based on this experience, I would like to inform about Ganghwa not only other regions but also the world through internet media, news and newspapers.

@@ 12번째 줄: / 12번째 줄: @@
 [[File:글로벌캠프.png/150px]]
 Although I lived in Ganghwa for a long time, I didn't know much about Ganghwa. However, people from other regions knew the charm of Ganghwa and visited Ganghwa many times. Knowing this fact, I felt that I should know more about my hometown, and this led me to participate in the global camp. I chose the topic 'Culture and Society of Ganghwa' among many topics related to Ganghwa. Of course, there were many other interesting topics, but I thought the range was too limited to know all about it. So, I chose a topic that shows various characteristics of Ganghwa.
 Even before the camp, I knew about Ganghwa's festival such as the Ganghwa Dolmen Festival and Ganghwa's specialty such as ginseng and sweet potatoes. During my stay in ganghwa, many people keep asking me about ganghwa speciality, and that’s how I learn from them.
 In general, I learned about Ganghwa culture and society that I researched directly during the camp. I learned that there is a wind orchestra in Ganghwa, and the society of Ganghwa and Shamanism are connected through Mt. Mani of Ganghwa. Listening to another group's presentation, I also learned that Ganghwa and the Goryeo Dynasty were closely related, which made me feel that the proud of the old site of Ganghwa.
 During the camp, My role is for the Ganghwa Festival, such as Ganghwa's Mt. Goryeo azalea Festival and salted shrimp Festival, and I wrote a presentation script of the news format. Based on the presentation script, I also conducted presentation exercise.
 As I announced through the news format during the camp, I think that I wanted to use the media format to inform Ganghwa. Of course, I still know that there are many visitors to Ganghwa. But when I asked my friends in other regions, "Did you know about the Ganghwa?" there have been many friends who answered "I didn't know." Based on this experience, I would like to inform them about Ganghwa not only other regions but also the world through internet media, news and newspapers.

@@ 11번째 줄: / 11번째 줄: @@
 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
 [[File:글로벌캠프.png/150px]]
-Although I lived in Ganghwa for a long time, I didn't know what the charm of Ganghwa was. However, people from other regions knew the charm of Ganghwa and visited Ganghwa many times. Watching this scene, I felt that I should know more about my hometown than them, and this led me to participate in the global camp.
+Although I lived in Ganghwa for a long time, I didn't know much about Ganghwa. However, people from other regions knew the charm of Ganghwa and visited Ganghwa many times. Knowing this fact, I felt that I should know more about my hometown, and this led me to participate in the global camp. I chose the topic 'Culture and Society of Ganghwa' among many topics related to Ganghwa. Of course, there were many other interesting topics, but I thought the range was too limited to know all about it. So, I chose a topic that shows various characteristics of Ganghwa.
-I chose the topic 'Culture and Society of Gnghwa' among many topics related to Ganghwa. Of course, there were many other interesting topics, but I thought the range was too limited to know all about it. So, I chose a topic that shows variously the charm of Ganghwa.
+Even before the camp, I knew about Ganghwa's festival such as the Ganghwa Dolmen Festival and Ganghwa's specialty such as ginseng and sweet potatoes. During my stay in ganghwa, many people keep asking me about ganghwa speciality, and that’s how I learn from them.
 In general, I learned about Ganghwa culture and society that I researched directly during the camp. I learned that there is a wind orchestra in Ganghwa, and the society of Ganghwa and Shamanism are connected through Mt. Mani of Ganghwa. Listening to another group's presentation, I also learned that Ganghwa and the Goryeo Dynasty were closely related, which made me feel that the proud of the old site of Ganghwa.
-Even before the camp, I knew about Ganghwa's festiver such as the Ganghwa Dolmen Festival and Ganghwa's specialty such as ginseng and sweet potatoes. Because During my life in Ganghwa, many people asked me, and I saw and felt many things about Ganghwa.
-−
-In general, I learned about Ganghwa culture and society that I researched directly during the camp. I learned that there is a wind orchestra in Ganghwa, and that the society of Ganghwa and Shamanism are connected through Mt. Mani of Ganghwa. Listening to another group's presentation, I also learned that Ganghwa and the Goryeo Dynasty were closely related, which made me feel that the proud of the old site of Ganghwa.
-−
 During the camp, My role is for the Ganghwa Festival, such as Ganghwa's Mt. Goryeo azalea Festival and salted shrimp Festival, and I wrote a presentation script of the news format. Based on the presentation script, I also conducted presentation exercise.
+As I announced through the news format during the camp, I think that I wanted to use the media format to inform Ganghwa. Of course, I still know that there are many visitors to Ganghwa. But when I asked my friends in other regions, "Did you know about the Ganghwa?" there have been many friends who answered "I didn't know." Based on this experience, I would like to inform them about Ganghwa not only other regions but also the world through internet media, news and newspapers.
 As I announced through the news format during the camp, I think that I wanted to use the media format to inform Ganghwa. Of course, I still know that there are many visitors to Ganghwa. But when I asked my friends in other regions, "Did you know about the Ganghwa?" there have been many friends who answered "I didn't know." Based on this experience, I would like to inform about Ganghwa not only other regions but also the world through internet media, news and newspapers.

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 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
+[[File:글로벌캠프.png/150px]]
 Although I lived in Ganghwa for a long time, I didn't know what the charm of Ganghwa was. However, people from other regions knew the charm of Ganghwa and visited Ganghwa many times. Watching this scene, I felt that I should know more about my hometown than them, and this led me to participate in the global camp.
 I chose the topic 'Culture and Society of Gnghwa' among many topics related to Ganghwa. Of course, there were many other interesting topics, but I thought the range was too limited to know all about it. So, I chose a topic that shows variously the charm of Ganghwa.

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-[[File:rmffhqjfzoavm.png]][[File:govlrmffhqjfzoavm.png]]==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
+[[File/150px:rmffhqjfzoavm.png]][[File/150px:govlrmffhqjfzoavm.png]]==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>