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2019년 1월 22일 (화) 01:58에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

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2019-01-22T01:57:38Z

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Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 박수빈 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 박수○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

2019-01-11T02:18:31Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 박수빈 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 박수○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

9박수빈: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2019-01-09T10:44:12Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

9박수빈: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2019-01-09T10:25:19Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

9박수빈: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2019-01-09T10:24:50Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

2019년 1월 9일 (수) 10:15에 대한 9박수빈의 편집

2019-01-09T10:15:56Z

9박수빈: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2019-01-09T10:05:53Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

9박수빈: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2019-01-09T09:56:22Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

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 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 7]]'''''</center>
 I participated in this global camp for the second time. I chose the theme of ' Management of Goryeo, Byeongnando' at the last Global. My dream was marketer before but turned into biological researcher. So I chose the subject of renewable energy and conservation at this global camp. This time, I participated in the global camp, gaining more knowledge, various experiences, and making presentations with people for the first time. I thought it was a great opportunity to improve my ability to write and speak English for 3 days. I also participated this time because I gained a lot of experience during the last global camp.

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 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 7]]'''''</center>
-[[File:GGHS 박수빈-3.jpg|280px]]
+[[File:GGHS 박수빈-3.jpg]]
 I participated in this global camp for the second time. I chose the theme of ' Management of Goryeo, Byeongnando' at the last Global. My dream was marketer before but turned into biological researcher. So I chose the subject of renewable energy and conservation at this global camp. This time, I participated in the global camp, gaining more knowledge, various experiences, and making presentations with people for the first time. I thought it was a great opportunity to improve my ability to write and speak English for 3 days. I also participated this time because I gained a lot of experience during the last global camp.

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 {{GGHS학생
-|사진 = [[File:GGHS 박수빈-3.jpg|280px]]
+|사진 =
-|이름 = 박수빈
+|학번 = 1209
-|영문 = Subin Park
+|위키아이디= 9박수○
-|학번 = 	1209
-|팀번호 = 7
-|위키아이디= 9박수빈
 }}
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 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 7]]'''''</center>
-[[File:GGHS 박수빈-2.jpg|thumbnail|left|an interesting presentation(Ganghwayeo Go)]]
+[[File:GGHS 박수빈-3.jpg|280px]]
-[[File:GGHS 박수빈-1.jpg|thumbnail|left|Creating Mind Map]]
 I participated in this global camp for the second time. I chose the theme of ' Management of Goryeo, Byeongnando' at the last Global. My dream was marketer before but turned into biological researcher. So I chose the subject of renewable energy and conservation at this global camp. This time, I participated in the global camp, gaining more knowledge, various experiences, and making presentations with people for the first time. I thought it was a great opportunity to improve my ability to write and speak English for 3 days. I also participated this time because I gained a lot of experience during the last global camp.
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 And I was in charge of researching data and translating it. I also actively expressed my opinion when we discussed what we will do with the team leader. Not only that but also i participated in displaying our topic through Wiki.
 Thanks to the useful information that I get through this camp about management in Goryeo Dynasty, i think it will help me to choose my strategy in attracting not only the local but also the foreigners. As trading with Arabian merchants in Byeongnando was the reason that made 'Goryeo' called 'Korea', this will be a good motivation for me if I become a marketer for Cosmetics Company to promote our cosmetics products to the world with their excellent marketing strategies.
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-[[File:eff.png|300px]]
-[[File:ess.png|300px]]

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 [[File:GGHS 박수빈-1.jpg|thumbnail|left|Creating Mind Map]]
-I participated in this global camp for the second time. I chose the subject of renewable energy and conservation at this global camp. I chose the theme of ' Management of Goryeo, Byeongnando' at the last Global. This time, I participated in the global camp, gaining more knowledge, various experiences, and making presentations with people for the first time. I thought it was a great opportunity to improve my ability to write and speak English for 3 days. I also participated this time because I gained a lot of experience during the last global camp.
+I participated in this global camp for the second time. I chose the theme of ' Management of Goryeo, Byeongnando' at the last Global. My dream was marketer before but turned into biological researcher. So I chose the subject of renewable energy and conservation at this global camp. This time, I participated in the global camp, gaining more knowledge, various experiences, and making presentations with people for the first time. I thought it was a great opportunity to improve my ability to write and speak English for 3 days. I also participated this time because I gained a lot of experience during the last global camp.
 My dream is to be a biological researcher. I am interested in living things and I like biomedical science. So I chose this topic because I wanted to have a global camp to learn about the creatures in Ganghwa. Also, these days, the Earth is getting warmer due to environmental pollution, so I was interested in one of many solutions: renewable energy. Because we can reduce environmental pollution through renewable energy. So I thought it would be fun to research, think and announce during this camp, connecting biology and renewable energy. I was also proud and excited to be able to use what I learned at school during this time.

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 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 7]]'''''</center>
-[[File:GGHS 박수빈-2.jpg|thumbnail|an interesting presentation(Ganghwayeo Go)]]
+[[File:GGHS 박수빈-2.jpg|thumbnail|left|an interesting presentation(Ganghwayeo Go)]]
-[[File:GGHS 박수빈-1.jpg|thumbnail|Creating Mind Map]]
+[[File:GGHS 박수빈-1.jpg|thumbnail|left|Creating Mind Map]]
 I participated in this global camp for the second time. I chose the subject of renewable energy and conservation at this global camp. I chose the theme of ' Management of Goryeo, Byeongnando' at the last Global. This time, I participated in the global camp, gaining more knowledge, various experiences, and making presentations with people for the first time. I thought it was a great opportunity to improve my ability to write and speak English for 3 days. I also participated this time because I gained a lot of experience during the last global camp.

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 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 7]]'''''</center>
 I participated in this global camp for the second time. I chose the subject of renewable energy and conservation at this global camp. I chose the theme of ' Management of Goryeo, Byeongnando' at the last Global. This time, I participated in the global camp, gaining more knowledge, various experiences, and making presentations with people for the first time. I thought it was a great opportunity to improve my ability to write and speak English for 3 days. I also participated this time because I gained a lot of experience during the last global camp.
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 I feel like I learned more from this camp than I learned from the last camp, and I am really happy to have a more diverse experience. If there is another opportunity like this, I will not miss it. And I will certainly become a biological researcher and become a person who will study and study more about living creatures on Earth.
 ==2018 Summer Personal Essay==

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 I feel like I learned more from this camp than I learned from the last camp, and I am really happy to have a more diverse experience. If there is another opportunity like this, I will not miss it. And I will certainly become a biological researcher and become a person who will study and study more about living creatures on Earth.
-[[File:GGHS 박수빈-2.jpg|300px]]
+<gallery mode="packed">
-[[File:GGHS 박수빈-1.jpg|300px]]
+File:GGHS 박수빈-2.jpg|an interesting presentation(Ganghwayeo Go)
 ==2018 Summer Personal Essay==

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 I participated in this global camp for the second time. I chose the subject of renewable energy and conservation at this global camp. I chose the theme of ' Management of Goryeo, Byeongnando' at the last Global. This time, I participated in the global camp, gaining more knowledge, various experiences, and making presentations with people for the first time. I thought it was a great opportunity to improve my ability to write and speak English for 3 days. I also participated this time because I gained a lot of experience during the last global camp.
-My dream is to be a biology researcher. I am interested in living things and I like biomedical science. So I chose this topic because I wanted to have a global camp to learn about the creatures in Ganghwa. Also, these days, the Earth is getting warmer due to environmental pollution, so I was interested in one of many solutions: renewable energy. Because we can reduce environmental pollution through renewable energy. So I thought it would be fun to research, think and announce during this camp, connecting biology and renewable energy. I was also proud and excited to be able to use what I learned during this time.
+My dream is to be a biological researcher. I am interested in living things and I like biomedical science. So I chose this topic because I wanted to have a global camp to learn about the creatures in Ganghwa. Also, these days, the Earth is getting warmer due to environmental pollution, so I was interested in one of many solutions: renewable energy. Because we can reduce environmental pollution through renewable energy. So I thought it would be fun to research, think and announce during this camp, connecting biology and renewable energy. I was also proud and excited to be able to use what I learned at school during this time.
 Before the camp, I knew only what I had learned at school, what renewable energy was, what life was and what kind of things were. Through this camp, however, we learned more about the new and renewable energy plants in Ganghwa, what creatures live in Ganghwa, and what natural monuments of Ganghwa are.
-There were also many newly discovered creatures that looked at living in Ganghwa, so I became more interested in living things. And I wanted to know why the environment of Ganghwa is good for living organisms, why creatures in Ganghwa lives in other areas except Ganghwa, and what it has in common with Ganghwa. And I have curious about renewables such as where to install renewable energy.
+There were also many newly discovered creatures that looked at living in Ganghwa, so I became more interested in living things. And I wanted to know why the environment of Ganghwa is good for living organisms, where creatures in Ganghwa lives in other areas except Ganghwa, and what it has in common with Ganghwa. And I have curious about renewables such as where to install renewable energy.
-I worked in the team to investigate and translate the creatures living in Ganghwa. We also posted on our group's research on Wikipedia, and made necessary props for the presentation on the last day. He also created a mind map on Wiki. I am not good at computer but I was proud to have made mind map and put an icon in it. And when my friends looked busy and there seemed to be a lot of work to do, I tried hard to finish it by helping my friends.
+I worked in the team to investigate and translate the creatures living in Ganghwa. We also posted on our group's research on Wiki, and made necessary props for the presentation on the last day. I also created a mind map on Wiki. I am not good at computer but I was proud to have made mind map and put an icon in it. And when my friends looked busy and there seemed to be a lot of work to do, I tried hard to finish it by helping my friends.
-Through this camp, I wanted to do more biological research which was my dream. As I learned about the creatures I didn't know, and learned about why trees are natural monuments, I was excited and wanted to find out more about the variety of creatures living in my country. And I also became more interested in renewable energy, so I wanted to work hard as a person who can develop renewable energy and save the Earth. Through this camp, we should work harder to develop new and renewable energy to preserve the various creatures that are dying of environmental pollution, and we hope to achieve peaceful coexistence with nature and human beings by doing what we can to protect the environment.
+Through this camp, I wanted to do more biological research which was my dream. As I learned about the creatures I didn't know, and learned about why various trees are natural monuments, I was excited and wanted to find out more about the variety of creatures living in not only my country but also other countries. And I also became more interested in renewable energy, so I wanted to work hard as a person who can develop renewable energy and save the Earth,too. During this camp,I think that we should work harder to develop renewable energy to preserve the various creatures that are dying of environmental pollution, and we hope to achieve peaceful coexistence with nature and human beings by doing what we can to protect the environment.
-I feel like I learned more from this camp than I learned from the last camp, and I am really happy to have a more diverse experience. If there is another opportunity like this, I will not miss it. And I will become a biological researcher and become a person who will study and study more about living creatures on Earth.
+I feel like I learned more from this camp than I learned from the last camp, and I am really happy to have a more diverse experience. If there is another opportunity like this, I will not miss it. And I will certainly become a biological researcher and become a person who will study and study more about living creatures on Earth.
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