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‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

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김도희: 새 문서: Topic: The measures for Unified Korea based on the diplomacy and the internal policy in Goryeo Dynasty Team: 5 Name: 김도희 Student Number: 10503 Under the name of " Global Camp,...

2018-07-26T03:40:33Z

새 문서: Topic: The measures for Unified Korea based on the diplomacy and the internal policy in Goryeo Dynasty Team: 5 Name: 김도희 Student Number: 10503 Under the name of " Global Camp,...

새 문서

Topic: The measures for Unified Korea based on the diplomacy and the internal policy in Goryeo Dynasty
Team: 5
Name: 김도희
Student Number: 10503

Under the name of " Global Camp, " foreign instructors would come and talk with foreigners in English, and there would not be many chances to use English directly in this camp other than this one. So, I joined this camp.

The reason I choose this 'politics' topic is because it has to do with my dream. My dream is to be a police officer. The police are those who ensure the social order and well-being of the nation and protect the safety and property of the people. I chose this theme because the state of a country is affected by politics, and I have to know politics to protect nation.

First of all, Goryeo was founded by King Taejo who unified the later three kingdoms. King Taejo, who actively accepted various peoples, achieved true unification. Unification is not easy for the two Koreas, who live completely different lives in the political system of free democracy and popular democracy. Therefore, it is important to carefully review the internal policies of Goryeo which unified the following the later three countries and come up with ways to unify the two Koreas.

I explored the internal policies of Goryeo and translated them into English, identifying the achievements of Taejo Wang Gun, Gwangjong, and Seongjong. King Taejo accpted the powerful family and kept them in check. and accepted the various people. Gwang-jong the Slave Review Law was enforced to free slaves illegally owned by the local gentry. With this, Goryeo reorganized its state system and created a new political order. He accepted Choi Seung-ro's article 28 and insisted on running the country based on Confucian ideology, encouraged filial piety, and the development of a new dynasty for politics, society and culture.

Through this activity, we were able to understand the wisdom of Goryeo's diplomacy and domestic policies. The unification of the later three kingdoms during the Goryeo Dynasty gave much thought to the unification of the two Koreas. Unification requires understanding rather than discrimination and indifference. Taejo's policy of integration with the powerful family members gave us something to think about. We need to take a closer look at these internal policies of Goryeo. For the sake of the well-being of our people and world peace, I hope the unification will be achieved as soon as possible.

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 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
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 Before I took part in this camp, I saw an article on the Internet that looked remarkable. It was an internet article titled 'Ganghwa the Roofless Museum, No Representative?' As I read the article, I think that Ganghwa Island has many historical places and even a world heritage site called 'Dolmen'. However, as the title of this article suggests, if someone asks me who is the representative of Ganghwa, I can not answer it.
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 I was not confident in English until middle school. But after I got into high school, I tried English and got good grades. However, there were not many opportunities to use English in real life. This time an opportunity has come to me. Under the name of ' Global Camp, ' foreign instructors also come. I thought this camp would be a valuable and valuable opportunity to communicate with foreigners by talking in English. So I joined this camp.

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+Before I took part in this camp, I saw an article on the Internet that looked remarkable. It was an internet article titled 'Ganghwa the Roofless Museum, No Representative?' As I read the article, I think that Ganghwa Island has many historical places and even a world heritage site called 'Dolmen'. However, as the title of this article suggests, if someone asks me who is the representative of Ganghwa, I can not answer it.
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← 이전 판		2018년 12월 28일 (금) 10:25 판
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	Topic: The measures for Unified Korea based on the diplomacy and the internal policy in Goryeo Dynasty		Topic: The measures for Unified Korea based on the diplomacy and the internal policy in Goryeo Dynasty
	Team: 5		Team: 5

← 이전 판		2018년 7월 26일 (목) 07:15 판
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	I explored the internal policies of Goryeo and translated them into English, identifying the achievements of Taejo Wang Gun, Gwangjong, and Seongjong. King Taejo accpted the powerful family and kept them in check. and accepted the various people. Gwang-jong the Slave Review Law was enforced to free slaves illegally owned by the local gentry. With this, Goryeo reorganized its state system and created a new political order. He accepted Choi Seung-ro's article 28 and insisted on running the country based on Confucian ideology, encouraged filial piety, and the development of a new dynasty for politics, society and culture.		I explored the internal policies of Goryeo and translated them into English, identifying the achievements of Taejo Wang Gun, Gwangjong, and Seongjong. King Taejo accpted the powerful family and kept them in check. and accepted the various people. Gwang-jong the Slave Review Law was enforced to free slaves illegally owned by the local gentry. With this, Goryeo reorganized its state system and created a new political order. He accepted Choi Seung-ro's article 28 and insisted on running the country based on Confucian ideology, encouraged filial piety, and the development of a new dynasty for politics, society and culture.

−	Through this activity, we were able to understand the wisdom of Goryeo's diplomacy and domestic policies. The unification of the later three kingdoms during the Goryeo Dynasty gave much thought to the unification of the two Koreas. Unification requires understanding rather than discrimination and indifference. Taejo's policy of integration with the powerful family members gave us something to think about. We need to take a closer look at these internal policies of Goryeo. For the sake of the well-being of our people and world peace, I hope the unification will be achieved as soon as possible.	+	Through this activity, we were able to understand the wisdom of Goryeo's diplomacy and domestic policies. The unification of the later three kingdoms during the Goryeo Dynasty gave much thought to the unification of the two Koreas. Unification requires understanding rather than discrimination and indifference. Taejo's policy of integration with the powerful family members gave us something to think about. We need to take a closer look at these internal policies of Goryeo. Our country is the only divided country in the whole world. For the sake of the well-being of our people and world peace, I hope the unification will be achieved as soon as possible.

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 Name: 김도희
 Student Number: 10503
+                                                [[File:img_sub02_top.jpg]]
-Under the name of " Global Camp, " foreign instructors would come and talk with foreigners in English, and there would not be many chances to use English directly in this camp other than this one. So, I joined this camp.
+I was not confident in English until middle school. But after I got into high school, I tried English and got good grades. However, there were not many opportunities to use English in real life. This time an opportunity has come to me. Under the name of ' Global Camp, ' foreign instructors also come. I thought this camp would be a valuable and valuable opportunity to communicate with foreigners by talking in English. So I joined this camp.
 The reason I choose this 'politics' topic is because it has to do with my dream. My dream is to be a police officer. The police are those who ensure the social order and well-being of the nation and protect the safety and property of the people. I chose this theme because the state of a country is affected by politics, and I have to know politics to protect nation.